Post by G ♥ t h i k a l e a on Jan 15, 2010 18:45:06 GMT -5
I PROMISE I WILL NOT WRITE ANY INAPPROPRIATE (18+) STUFF ON HERE. You know what I mean. Oh, another warning: Yaoi is malexmale. o.o; I need help/opinions with writing my story. ^_^; Mary said she'd read it if I finished it, so I shall finish it <3
And I'm scared that:
1. It won't be finished.
2. It'll be too much like Junjou Romantica
3. The storyline won't work out
4. I'll be too tempted to add smut
5. There IS no storyline
6. I can't write worth crap
7. It'll be too long
8. It'll be crappy and too short
9. I won't be able to express the feelings properly
10. I'll do too much fluff
11. OOC? Is that possible? I mean, they're my characters so it's hard to OOC, but I mean I can probably find a way to do that. Dx
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Anyway I was thinking of a plot at the beginning. JR's plot is somewhat loose. o.O; They don't explain too much, but it's better than lots of Yaoi manga out there XD Their plot is that the kid's brother is friends with a very well-known writer, who just happens to be gay, and he loves the kid's brother. However, the kid's brother gets married. The kid also wants to get into a university so ends up living at Usagi's (writer) house and studying with him.
Let's do this like Usagi ~Usami Akihiko <3~ does (He's a writer!) : He has different scenarios and asks which one you like the most. All of these are BETA btw, and I was thinking of intertwining three stories, but that's so close to Junjou Romantica. T.T I need more than one couple, though, so I think I'll do three or four anyway. XD However, this is for the Main Charas of the story (Like in JR, they have Misaki and Usagi as the mains, and branch off into the other love stories).
1a. A male kid whose stepmother has been torturing whenever his father is on a business trip. He develops a deep depression, even after the stepmother is divorced, and rarely talks. He gets good grades, and smiles at the right times, but his eyes are empty. A man notices and begins to talk to him. His father gets fed up at his non-talkative son and marries another woman, which hurts the kid more. The man allows him to stay at his place.
--> Kid is not technically a kid, like 13. <_<; He's definitely 15+.
1b. A male kid whose stepmother has been torturing whenever his father is on a business trip. A man hears him screaming while on a walk / on his way to business. He goes in and rescues him, and the father will not believe his son about what his stepmother has done (because he really loves his new wife, and the son has already been attempting to sabotage the relationship). The man allows him to stay at his place and they eventually fall in love.
--> Kid is not technically a kid, like 13. <_<; He's definitely 15+.
2a. A male asian exchange student has arrived at America. His English is not as good as he thought, and a few people spot him and attempt to ( ) him. (What do you think the ( ) should be? Kidnap? Murder? Beat him up?) He doesn't know how to fight, either, and another asian (because then they can communicate) man comes by and saves him. (Oh god this sounds like Junjou Terrorist. LMFAO) He is grateful for the help, and he decides to stay there until he can contact his parents (who he attempted calling, but they are out of reach atm) or get a job to pay for his own place and for University. They fall in love on the way.
2b. A male asian exchange student takes the wrong plane and ends up in New York or something. (<_< Maybe not exactly New York, I'll probably use Texas or somewhere I've lived before so I can describe it well; if I want to use New York I'd need Sam's help, which I'm not sure if she wants to help me with this lols)Another asian sees him wandering around (because then they can communicate) and then helps him. He is grateful for the help, and the man allows him to stay there until he can contact his parents (who he attempted calling, but they are out of reach atm) or get a job to pay for his own place and for University. They fall in love on the way.
3. A boy has always loved to crossdress, but everyone does not approve of it. He stops crossdressing but really wants to do it. He goes online a forum for male crossdressers and finds some good friends, including an man. His parents find out and don't let him on the computer anymore. However the man has already been told his address and sneaks over every few days. The boy is delighted, but they must keep it a secret from the parents.
---> Meh, somewhat...bleh. :/ I don't like it.
4. Lucas is in love with Charlie. Charlie does not love Lucas, but instead loves Cody. However, Cody is in love with Lucas. What will happen next? And how do Yuanhan and Wenhan get involved in this love triangle? Read the Yaoi Novel 'Lovingly Complicated' by Lydia Eldafreya to find out !!!!
5. There is a boy at a school. He is very smart and has skipped about four grades (LMFAO). However, he notices a senior (4 years +) boy always sitting in the classroom. Everyone whispers bad rumors about the senior and he really does have a bad attitude. The truth is that the senior has been held back because he is too lazy to study. However under some circumstances (yet to think of circumstances), the smart boy and the stupid boy (LOL stupid boy) end up having to bear each other's company through a project that the teacher assigned. The smart boy immediately launches himself into it, but the teacher says that both must participate or else he will fail both. So the smart boy must help the stupid boy, and very surprisingly the stupid boy catches on quickly. They become friends and learn more about each other, although the smart boy always acts superior. They end up liking each other.
6. Tidus decides that Yuna is boring and decides to ditch her for Auron; unfortunately Cloud has accidentally warped to this dimension and ends up falling in love with Tidus. Auron and Cloud battle off to see who gets Tidus, and then Sephiroth gets pissed off at Cloud and steals him away to Mobius, where they meet Sonic and Shadow.
Dx That's all I can think of for now ~ But I already have two other couples' stories written out too.
[ Story of the Fighter ]
A man is always pissed off and fighting everyone. He actually happens to be the one that attacks a boy in scenario 1a, and used to be in love with the man who rescued the boy. This pisses him off a lot, and he takes up fighting even more people. However, he meets a professor? Random man? that is around his age and totally looks down on him for fighting, and refuses to talk to fighter. However, the fighter becomes intrigued by the professor and begins to stalk him a little bit. The professor notices and has a talk with him, angry at the invasion of his privacy. Yet he is a little flattered at the attention, so he also says some things to egg on the fighter, one of which is that he will allow the fighter to stay with him if he stops hurting others.
[ Story of the Rich Kid ]
This guy is rich and spoiled with objects, but he does not have love. He sees in a manga about love and tries to find it, but all of the girls reject him. However he sees the #1 couple together and seeks the happiness that they have given each other. He wants to be with both of them. However, after he sees them together enough and they reject him, he feels even more lonely and attempts to suicide or something equally drastic. After his parents' butlers see and try to stop him, they contact his parents (who are always away in a diff country) and they pay for a counselor. Little does the kid know that the counselor is a somewhat perv, and likes kids. XD (Don't worry I won't write weird crap in.)
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So that's the stories, I want help on choosing the scenario. T_T; And also I want to know if anyone has any ideas for editing the current set-in-stone stories / scenarios. I am trying not to make this tooo long but I want it to be dramafuls, fluffyfuls, and most of all yaoifuls. :3
And I'm scared that:
1. It won't be finished.
2. It'll be too much like Junjou Romantica
3. The storyline won't work out
4. I'll be too tempted to add smut
5. There IS no storyline
6. I can't write worth crap
7. It'll be too long
8. It'll be crappy and too short
9. I won't be able to express the feelings properly
10. I'll do too much fluff
11. OOC? Is that possible? I mean, they're my characters so it's hard to OOC, but I mean I can probably find a way to do that. Dx
-----
Anyway I was thinking of a plot at the beginning. JR's plot is somewhat loose. o.O; They don't explain too much, but it's better than lots of Yaoi manga out there XD Their plot is that the kid's brother is friends with a very well-known writer, who just happens to be gay, and he loves the kid's brother. However, the kid's brother gets married. The kid also wants to get into a university so ends up living at Usagi's (writer) house and studying with him.
Let's do this like Usagi ~Usami Akihiko <3~ does (He's a writer!) : He has different scenarios and asks which one you like the most. All of these are BETA btw, and I was thinking of intertwining three stories, but that's so close to Junjou Romantica. T.T I need more than one couple, though, so I think I'll do three or four anyway. XD However, this is for the Main Charas of the story (Like in JR, they have Misaki and Usagi as the mains, and branch off into the other love stories).
1a. A male kid whose stepmother has been torturing whenever his father is on a business trip. He develops a deep depression, even after the stepmother is divorced, and rarely talks. He gets good grades, and smiles at the right times, but his eyes are empty. A man notices and begins to talk to him. His father gets fed up at his non-talkative son and marries another woman, which hurts the kid more. The man allows him to stay at his place.
--> Kid is not technically a kid, like 13. <_<; He's definitely 15+.
1b. A male kid whose stepmother has been torturing whenever his father is on a business trip. A man hears him screaming while on a walk / on his way to business. He goes in and rescues him, and the father will not believe his son about what his stepmother has done (because he really loves his new wife, and the son has already been attempting to sabotage the relationship). The man allows him to stay at his place and they eventually fall in love.
--> Kid is not technically a kid, like 13. <_<; He's definitely 15+.
2a. A male asian exchange student has arrived at America. His English is not as good as he thought, and a few people spot him and attempt to ( ) him. (What do you think the ( ) should be? Kidnap? Murder? Beat him up?) He doesn't know how to fight, either, and another asian (because then they can communicate) man comes by and saves him. (Oh god this sounds like Junjou Terrorist. LMFAO) He is grateful for the help, and he decides to stay there until he can contact his parents (who he attempted calling, but they are out of reach atm) or get a job to pay for his own place and for University. They fall in love on the way.
2b. A male asian exchange student takes the wrong plane and ends up in New York or something. (<_< Maybe not exactly New York, I'll probably use Texas or somewhere I've lived before so I can describe it well; if I want to use New York I'd need Sam's help, which I'm not sure if she wants to help me with this lols)Another asian sees him wandering around (because then they can communicate) and then helps him. He is grateful for the help, and the man allows him to stay there until he can contact his parents (who he attempted calling, but they are out of reach atm) or get a job to pay for his own place and for University. They fall in love on the way.
3. A boy has always loved to crossdress, but everyone does not approve of it. He stops crossdressing but really wants to do it. He goes online a forum for male crossdressers and finds some good friends, including an man. His parents find out and don't let him on the computer anymore. However the man has already been told his address and sneaks over every few days. The boy is delighted, but they must keep it a secret from the parents.
---> Meh, somewhat...bleh. :/ I don't like it.
4. Lucas is in love with Charlie. Charlie does not love Lucas, but instead loves Cody. However, Cody is in love with Lucas. What will happen next? And how do Yuanhan and Wenhan get involved in this love triangle? Read the Yaoi Novel 'Lovingly Complicated' by Lydia Eldafreya to find out !!!!
5. There is a boy at a school. He is very smart and has skipped about four grades (LMFAO). However, he notices a senior (4 years +) boy always sitting in the classroom. Everyone whispers bad rumors about the senior and he really does have a bad attitude. The truth is that the senior has been held back because he is too lazy to study. However under some circumstances (yet to think of circumstances), the smart boy and the stupid boy (LOL stupid boy) end up having to bear each other's company through a project that the teacher assigned. The smart boy immediately launches himself into it, but the teacher says that both must participate or else he will fail both. So the smart boy must help the stupid boy, and very surprisingly the stupid boy catches on quickly. They become friends and learn more about each other, although the smart boy always acts superior. They end up liking each other.
6. Tidus decides that Yuna is boring and decides to ditch her for Auron; unfortunately Cloud has accidentally warped to this dimension and ends up falling in love with Tidus. Auron and Cloud battle off to see who gets Tidus, and then Sephiroth gets pissed off at Cloud and steals him away to Mobius, where they meet Sonic and Shadow.
Dx That's all I can think of for now ~ But I already have two other couples' stories written out too.
[ Story of the Fighter ]
A man is always pissed off and fighting everyone. He actually happens to be the one that attacks a boy in scenario 1a, and used to be in love with the man who rescued the boy. This pisses him off a lot, and he takes up fighting even more people. However, he meets a professor? Random man? that is around his age and totally looks down on him for fighting, and refuses to talk to fighter. However, the fighter becomes intrigued by the professor and begins to stalk him a little bit. The professor notices and has a talk with him, angry at the invasion of his privacy. Yet he is a little flattered at the attention, so he also says some things to egg on the fighter, one of which is that he will allow the fighter to stay with him if he stops hurting others.
[ Story of the Rich Kid ]
This guy is rich and spoiled with objects, but he does not have love. He sees in a manga about love and tries to find it, but all of the girls reject him. However he sees the #1 couple together and seeks the happiness that they have given each other. He wants to be with both of them. However, after he sees them together enough and they reject him, he feels even more lonely and attempts to suicide or something equally drastic. After his parents' butlers see and try to stop him, they contact his parents (who are always away in a diff country) and they pay for a counselor. Little does the kid know that the counselor is a somewhat perv, and likes kids. XD (Don't worry I won't write weird crap in.)
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So that's the stories, I want help on choosing the scenario. T_T; And also I want to know if anyone has any ideas for editing the current set-in-stone stories / scenarios. I am trying not to make this tooo long but I want it to be dramafuls, fluffyfuls, and most of all yaoifuls. :3
